7. An opinion essay

The government plans to introduce school on Saturday mornings to improve the level of education. In my view, this would have some negative consequences.
In the first place, I believe that school is very important and necessary for young people. They spend five day of the week going to school, and I think that this is so much, so if this law is introduced, I've no doubt that a lot of children will be more tired and stressed. I also think that this cause that young people wouldn't have free time.
If the aim of the government is to lower the hours of school, it seems to me that there's a better alternative: If they spent more time on looking for good teachers, school would be better and children would learn more.